Friday, 4 July 2008

Review and Correct a Post


The Geography (original)

Well I’m student of geography of the University of Chile. My history with geography begun when I did the PSU test and my percentage I do not reach for study I like in this moment, history. My second option was geography however I don’t regret.

In the University I studied for four year and the next year I have that work of geographer and I look forward working in that I like. Physical geography for example.

In this years the principal subject that I have liked are they that deal this items, the nature, and the evolution of the earth and the principal feature of the surface.

Well I look forward working in these items in ten years like an all professional. Dedicated to use my knowledge and tools for do something in this planet.

The geographers have the necessary tools to make public to world how our planet suffers today. The geographers around world are silent for the disasters that have lot countries in the world in special Africa, American central and countries Asian.

The geographers have given to politicians the administration of the natural resource and they lost environmental north.

In conclusion the Earth died and the geographers have mush to do.

Correction

Well I’m student of geography of the University of Chile. My history with geography beginning when I did the PSU test and my score was insufficient for study what I like in this moment, history. My second option was geography however I don’t regret.

In the University I studied for four years and the next year I have to work like a geographer and I hope to work in something I like; Physical geography for example.

In this years the principal subject that I liked are linked to the nature, and the evolution of the earth and the principal feature of the surface.

Well I hope to work in these items in ten years like a complete professional. Dedicated to use my knowledge and tools for do something in this planet.

The geographers have the necessary tools to make public to world how our planet suffers today. The geographers around the world are silent for the disasters that have a lot countries in the world in special Africa, Central American and Asian Countries.

The geographers have given to politicians the administration of the natural resource and they lost environmental north.

In conclusion the Earth died and the geographers have much mush to do.


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